docs: update and minor fixes in index page

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@@ -8,33 +8,31 @@ Welcome to snf-image's documentation!
 
 .. image:: /images/logo.png
 
-snf-image is a `Ganeti <http://code.google.com/p/ganeti/>`_ OS definition,
-primary used by `Synnefo <http://www.synnefo.org/>`_. It is rewritten from
-scratch and allows Ganeti to launch instances from predefined or untrusted
-custom Images. The whole process of deploying an Image onto the block device,
-as provided by Ganeti, is done in complete isolation from the physical host,
-enhancing robustness and security.
+snf-image is a `Ganeti <http://code.google.com/p/ganeti/>`_ OS definition. It
+allows Ganeti to launch instances from predefined or untrusted custom Images.
+The whole process of deploying an Image onto the block device, as provided by
+Ganeti, is done in complete isolation from the physical host, enhancing
+robustness and security.
 
 snf-image supports `KVM <http://www.linux-kvm.org/page/Main_Page>`_ and
-`Xen <http://www.xenproject.org/>`_ based ganeti clusters.
+`Xen <http://www.xenproject.org/>`_ based Ganeti clusters.
 
-There are also additional hooks that can be enabled at image deployment. They
-allow for:
+snf-image also supports Image customization via hooks. Hooks allow for:
 
  * changing the password of root or arbitrary users
  * injecting files at arbitrary locations inside the filesystem, e.g., SSH keys
  * setting a custom hostname
  * re-creating SSH host keys to ensure the image uses unique keys
 
-snf-image has been used successfully to deploy many major Linux distributions
-(Debian, Ubuntu/Kubuntu, CentOS, Fedora, OpenSUSE), Windows 2008 R2 & Windows
-Server 2012, as well as FreeBSD 9.1
+snf-image is being used in large scale production environments with Ganeti to
+successfully deploy many major Linux distributions (Debian, Ubuntu/Kubuntu,
+CentOS, Fedora, OpenSUSE), Windows 2008 R2 & Windows Server 2012, as well as
+FreeBSD 9.1.
 
 The snf-image Ganeti OS Definition is released under
 `GPLv2 <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-2.0.html>`_.
 
 
-
 Contents:
 ^^^^^^^^^
 
@@ -52,4 +50,3 @@ Indices and tables
 * :ref:`genindex`
 * :ref:`modindex`
 * :ref:`search`
-